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By punchy
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09 December 2007 |
The smallest of things
the simplest of pleasures
they make our hearts sing
they storm all our weathers
they fill in the gaps
they comfort our strife
they read like a map
they colour our life
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Written by Fledermaus (3470 comments posted) 9th December 2007 | Sweet  |
Written by JohnFHamill (40 comments posted) 9th December 2007 |
The simplest things are those which provide the little rays of sunshine into our life but are often taken for granted and are sorely missed when they're gone. This here poem is a great little celebration of the magic they possess. | nice
Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 10th December 2007 | | gentle write, liked it | Simple Pleasures
Written by embro (126 comments posted) 13th December 2007 | | Nice sentiments and so true... Nice structure as well, quite unusual, which adds to the experience. |
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