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Lightning Princess & Ron White
By remoh
10 December 2007


lightning_princess: hi

 

ron_white: hi long time no see

 

lightning_princess: how r u?

 

ron_white: im doin good

 

ron_white: wat were u upto these days

 

lightning_princess: after long time we are chating

 

ron_white: yes...

 

lightning_princess: how's life?

 

ron_white: life is goin ok...just finished my internal; exams. which was bad by the

way...now i hv my university on 19th

 

ron_white: rt now boring my a*** off at home ( some delay 4 the reply)

 

ron_white: so wat were u upto

 

lightning_princess: today only college reopened after completion of my 3-1 exams

 

ron_white: 3-1??

 

lightning_princess: third year first semester

 

ron_white: im sory to say this...but which were course u were doin?

 

lightning_princess: engg IT branch

ron_white: oh yes...do u remeber wat i was doin?

 

ron_white: Laughing

 

lightning_princess: yes EEE 4rth year

 

ron_white: actually it was EC...but hey that was so nice that u remembered

 

lightning_princess: what else? how is ur day today?

 

ron_white: 2day...hmmmm...well had 2 stay home 2day as some work like painting is goin on

ron_white: as i was really bored i went to my friends then got some movies frm him

 

lightning_princess: it was not nice for me today

 

ron_white: wat happnd?

 

ron_white: first day was bad??

 

lightning_princess: yes

 

lightning_princess: my proposal was rejected

 

ron_white: proposal?? xplain im listening....

 

ron_white: hey!!

 

ron_white: ok               ( a long delay before the reply)

 

lightning_princess: actually iam in love with a person from past 3 years.He knew that i like him.But i didn't make dare to talk with him about this matter

 

ron_white: so he said no wen u asked...

 

lightning_princess: recently i made a call to him just to say bday wishes and yesterday night i have just forwarded a msg to his cell

 

ron_white: & then?

 

lightning_princess: today eveng i got a msg from him that he is not interseted in me,and he does't want to speak with me

 

lightning_princess: that's it

 

ron_white: wat did ur message say...???

 

lightning_princess: just a forward msg telling him goodnight

 

ron_white: & he reacted like that...dont u think he over reacted

 

lightning_princess: i dont know but 3 years i have suffered like anything

 

lightning_princess: he could have told it before only

 

ron_white: well listen...i like a girl too...for four years now

 

ron_white: now i cud make myself suffer over  this girl like anything

 

ron_white: but 2 be quiet honest with u ..u cant treat urself like that over one person

 

ron_white: the whole world is out there

 

ron_white: if u ask my advice ...act like nothing happnd....dont give a ___ 2 this guy....dont even give him any meaningful looks anymore ...

 

ron_white: act normal around him & move one

 

ron_white: move on

 

ron_white: one chapter closes and other begins

 

ron_white: thats how i deal with things like these

 

ron_white: if it is meant to be it will happen no matter wat you do or wat u dont do

 

ron_white: im sorry if im being preachy

 

lightning_princess: its ok but i can't see him any more,because he is not my coll,i met him when we were at another place,now we shifted our home

 

ron_white: oh ok ..hey i hop i didnt make things worse 4 u.....

 

ron_white: i just felt i shud say this 2 u...i have seen some of my frnds do this u no....drool over some girl like armageddon or something...

 

ron_white: there is so many more imp things in life...than a single person

 

lightning_princess: i know that that's i just want it to take light

 

ron_white: hopfully u will over come this pretty soon...

 

lightning_princess: it take some time

 

lightning_princess: but it's ok

 

ron_white: ofcourse it will...learning xperience if u ask me..

 

lightning_princess: what else?

 

lightning_princess: did u give any paper presentation

 

ron_white: yep that was over a month ago...

lightning_princess: what did u gave?

 

ron_white: something related 2 computers

 

lightning_princess: which topic u has given?

 

ron_white: serial attached scsi

 

lightning_princess: scsi means?

 

ron_white: small computer system interface

 

lightning_princess: ok

 

ron_white: did u hv ur paper presentation?

 

lightning_princess: next month i have to give

 

lightning_princess: what project u r planning 2 do?

  

ron_white: i dont no....something in the field of real time operating systems

 

lightning_princess: ok

 

lightning_princess: what else?

 

ron_white: well we r goin 4 a trip on Wednesday

  

lightning_princess: 2 where?

 

ron_white: a plce 60 km away...u no a place near by the river...

.

ron_white: just hanging out

 

lightning_princess: ok

 

lightning_princess: with ur friends?

 

ron_white: no alone

 

lightning_princess: y alone?

 

ron_white: ofcourse with my frnds... dum dum

(long uncomfortable silence follows) 

ron_white: hehe

 

lightning_princess: nice joke

 

ron_white: yeah...some times i crack stupid weird insensitive childish jokes..pls forgive me

 

lightning_princess: its ok

 

ron_white: so how was the first day of college

 

lightning_princess: its boring no one came 2day

 

ron_white: oh

 

ron_white: that happens

 

lightning_princess: yes

 

lightning_princess: did u have ur dinner?

 

ron_white: no im goin 2 have it

 

lightning_princess: me too

 

ron_white: so ok.. then..i will catch up with u later..

 

lightning_princess: when

 

ron_white: 2moro same time ...?

 

lightning_princess: ok

 

ron_white: ok then hop i helped u somehow

 

lightning_princess: yes

 

lightning_princess: thank u

 

ron_white: welcome...ok bye then

 

ron_white: & take care

 

lightning_princess: bye

  

Reviews

Written by bluecity (367 comments posted) 10th December 2007
A very modern story, this has the makings of something good. The title is great, to start off with. 
 
Your representation of msg txt is gd, yeh. I've had lots of conversations like this with my son and seen him have similar conversations with other people on Messenger. And I like the way you brought in the main story very gently and concluded it in the same way. It was all very understated. 
 
My main problem was text size. I nearly stopped reading it because it was too small and that would've been a shame! 
 
Well done! 
 
Rosemary 
 

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