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Apocalypse...now?
By woody44
10 December 2007

    I don`t put this forward as a solution, just a possible way out...if indeed this is what everyone wants.


 8th December 2007. A day that will live long in the memories of people who lived, or had once lived, in the village. It began soon after dawn, a strange howling wind blowing in from the west. By 10am it had reached gale force, branches and sheets of rusting corrugated iron littering the village square. And then soon after midday, with the sky the colour of dark chocolate, it happened. It swept in from across the fields, a swirling vortex picking up and scattering anything and everything in its path. Hedges, barns, cattle and sheep, nothing was spared. Relentlessly it moved on, its ferocious power encircling and reducing the Leg of Lamb Public House to a pile of bricks and shattered slates. Not yet satisfied it moved on down the main street, the Craft shop, Post Office, shoe shop, Grocery store, Bank, Butcher`s shop, The Wishing Well Cafe, Library, and police station; all were raised to the ground in a matter of minutes. And still it moved on, its anger undiminished, the bench in the village square reduced to matchwood in seconds. Still it tore forward, its power increasing as it sucked up Rose cottage before heading for the cluster of houses that made up the heart of the village. Within minutes they were no more, a distorted heap of stone and splintered slate.
     Then as quickly as it started, it was over. The sun came out and a glorious rainbow formed, its ends dipping towards the only untouched buildings in the village, the church and manor house. An errie silence fell over the whole place, broken only by the hiss of water from a fractured main as it shot high into the afternoon sky.

     A memorial now stands in place of the village bench. It commemorates the hundreds who lost their lives on that terrible day. Mary Walker...Jim Child...Mrs Loveday...Chris Mann...Alan Short..Ernie George,,Lydia Woods..so many names. Fred West, mercifully away at a brewery conference with Tanya that weekend, paid for the memorial out of his own pocket.
    It is fair to say  the heart was ripped out of the village that day. Those who survived had neither the energy nor the inclination to rebuild when so many painful memories lurked amongst the piles of dusty rubble. So they moved on, some seeking solace in a bottle, others, more resiliant perhaps, searching out a plot of land on which they and their family could once more build a life together....

Reviews
Grand finale?
Written by Fledermaus (3159 comments posted) 13th December 2007
It's better than the slow and painful death it was dying anyhow... :cry

Written by Levi (31 comments posted) 18th December 2007
I'd be up for seeing a, "I just had the strangest dream" skit straight from Dallas (and Family Guy) followed by a flamboyant return of the cast - especially the dead ones - plus some hot new celebs, special guest stars, and amnesia by the shedload. Anyone without amnesia gets a free baseball bat to the head (or road accident, or lost at sea) and at least one episode all to themselves, talking to their estranged partner who has been DEAD FOR FOUR YEARS... 
 
Maybe not.

Written by TurboWolffe (94 comments posted) 29th December 2007
i know naught of this, but i believe the apocolypse is approaching soundly. i even hear hussein was the 3rd antichrist. hitler too. 
 
a bottle of brandy & a pint of Irish beer, 
-TurboWolffe 
 
the amount and volume of description grabbed me. so simple and yet...

Written by TurboWolffe (94 comments posted) 29th December 2007
i know naught of this, but i believe the apocolypse is approaching soundly. i even hear hussein was the 3rd antichrist. hitler too. 
 
a bottle of brandy & a pint of Irish beer, 
-TurboWolffe 
 
the amount and volume of description grabbed me. so simple and yet...
Interesting idea
Written by patterjack (1068 comments posted) 29th December 2007
i see that the religious and the secular sites were spared -- so if ever i want to convert Peter into a monk and the lady into an abbess , it is possible. :grin  
 
I note that the place was raised to the ground . An uplifting end ! 
 
patterjack

Written by woody44 (761 comments posted) 29th December 2007
Yes well we all seem to be having trouble with a little `i` do we not Brian. 
 
And a very happy New Year to you and yours, 
 
Roger

Written by woody44 (761 comments posted) 29th December 2007
Thanks Fled, Levi and Turbo for your comments. As I stated at the head of the piece this was not by any means meant to be the definitive ending to the `Village`especially as I have been as guilty as anyone in not contributing to the ongoing storyline. I raise (or should that be raze) my hat to you Fled, and of course Brian for keeping the story ticking over...but maybe now is the time to try something completely new... 
 
Seasons Greeetings 
Roger
Bravo
Written by givitsum (651 comments posted) 16th March 2008
Well Done Roger. 
 
If the Village had been a race horse, they'd have shot the bugger months ago. 
 
Cheers,  
 
G
A nuclear winter?...
Written by woody44 (761 comments posted) 16th March 2008
Nice to see you back Chris! Is this just a fleeting visit or can we expect some juicy pieces from you again. As you see there are dastardly plans afoot to `raise` the Village from the ashes. But Mr Putin and I have a cunning plan.... 
 
Roger  

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