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By Ghost
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10 December 2007 |
In the midst of amber oscillation
The custodian stands forlorn
His eerie but sole existence
Preserves the temptatious corn
Ornate in yesterdays fashion
That begs a certain pride
Though void of all emotion
Stands tall and dignified
His kingdom spans the horizon
Picturesque and so serene
A patchwork of ripening fields
Rustic meadows and pastures green
As pangs of hunger loiter
The feathered take their chance
Till the impish winds a bluster
Animate the bird man to dance
No soul to renounce to heaven
No heartbeat for love to scan
Yet the silken glow of midnight moon
Casts the shadow of a man
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Written by Phil (6719 comments posted) 11th December 2007 | Really like this - simple, yet it has a little something more. Verse four, last line needs looking at, doesn't quite fit - or could be the way I'm reading. Phil. | Scarecrow Written by embro (126 comments posted) 13th December 2007 | I Like it.....And I liked it even better on the second read. Your phrasing and use of words are nicely descriptive and you drew me into into the mood of the poem. |
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