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Poetry
Scarecrow
By Ghost
10 December 2007

In the midst of amber oscillation
The custodian stands forlorn
His eerie but sole existence
Preserves the temptatious corn

Ornate in yesterdays fashion
That begs a certain pride
Though void of all emotion
Stands tall and dignified

His kingdom spans the horizon
Picturesque and so serene
A patchwork of ripening fields
Rustic meadows and pastures green

As pangs of hunger loiter
The feathered take their chance
Till the impish winds a bluster
Animate the bird man to dance

No soul to renounce to heaven
No heartbeat for love to scan
Yet the silken glow of midnight moon
Casts the shadow of a man

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Written by Phil (6719 comments posted) 11th December 2007
Really like this - simple, yet it has a little something more. 
 
Verse four, last line needs looking at, doesn't quite fit - or could be the way I'm reading. 
 
Phil.
Scarecrow
Written by embro (126 comments posted) 13th December 2007
I Like it.....And I liked it even better on the second read. 
Your phrasing and use of words are nicely descriptive and you drew me into into the mood of the poem.

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