May 12, 1863
I have had the most extraordinary letter. I really do not know what to make of it. It came in the post today, a fancy thick embossed envelope with the Shrigley Hall coat of arms on it.
May 11, 1863
Shrigley Hall,
Pott Shrigley,
Cheshire
Miss Margaret Forbes
7 George Street
Altrincham, Cheshire
Dear Miss Forbes,
In a recent discussion with my housekeeper, Mrs. Herman, she mentioned that she had heard via the postmaster at Poynton-Worth that someone was writing a book about my deceased mother. After much prodding, your name was produced, and she admitted giving you the name of an elderly publican as a source of information for your book.
Surely, Miss Forbes, the correct procedure would have been for you to contact me directly, rather than depend on tittle tattle from servants and peasants. If you in truth are writing a book about my mother, I would be the one with the most reliable information. I can only assume that you were too humble to approach me directly.
Therefore, I am going to take the matter in my own hands, and invite you here for tea on Sunday, the 24th at about 3 p.m. I would expect you can get a train from Altrincham to Poynton, and if we know the time of your arrival, we can see that there is a carriage to meet you and bring you here. We would, of course, take you to the station for your return journey.
Please bring with you any information that you have already gleaned about my mother, so I can ascertain as to whether it is accurate. I only hope that you are not intending to stir up yet again the story of her abduction, as she surely after all this time, should be allowed to rest in peace. My father, who was her husband, died eight years ago.
Please inform me of your intentions in this regard.
Yours faithfully,
Mrs. Ellen Jane Legh Lowther
I showed the letter to Mr. Balshaw and he agreed that it would be useful for me to have this contact. I might find out more about her mother, which could only add to my book.
And he says I need not be intimidated by her manner. Her mother’s life is a matter of public record, and there is no reason why one cannot write about it without the daughter’s permission. However, he suggests that I downplay the real objective of my book, in order not to antagonise her.
And so in less than a fortnight, I will be hopefully able to make my book more accurate and meaningful.
Here is Edward’s next letter to my Pa.
“December 10th, 1829
Newgate Prison
My dear Daniel,
You will be interested to know that my ideas about colonization are causing quite a stir. As I told you before, I wrote a series of letters about systematic colonization which was published in the London Morning Chronicle. The letters aroused such interest they were republished in book form edited by Robert Gouger.
In the letters I pretend that I am a surgeon gone out to Australia in an emigrant vessel.
Here is an extract from it. (I am talking about the useage of women who arrive in Australia.)
'The emigrants whom we took out as well as those in two other ships, which have arrived since, were immediately on their arrival engaged; - housemaids at about £17 and cooks about £20 a year. Married people get from £25 to £40 a year, with rations and a log cabin to live in. It does seem that in an emergency of this kind, nature with a voice more potent than that of political economy, dictates the course we should pursue. If as appears to be the case, we have broken the order which is said to be the first law of Heaven, our punishment great as it is, does not exceed our fault.
'We have sent to Australia the strong hands which should have been the protection and support of the starving needle-women; and we have denied the emigrant on a foreign soil his natural helpmate, with no other result but that of creating a plague-spot in the centre of society at home. This emigration movement is one on which we have greatly prided ourselves, and by which we have all to some extent profited; it has been extensively promoted by the state, and stimulated by private enterprise.
'If then, it has been so imperfectly and partially worked out, the extent of our previous negligence should be considered as the measure of our responsibility to repair the evil. Mr. Herbert’s plan of a society to promote the emigration of respectable females to Australia is an attempt to pay this dept, and hence its claim on public support. It has a just demand on private benevolence, and on the state conscience. It is one of those few schemes of wholesale alms-giving which are unattended with any danger, and which, while they give great temporary relief, may be also expected to produce a certain degree of more permanent good.'
I won’t go on with it, but perhaps you can get a flavour of what I am trying to convey.
I wish you and your family the best Christmas. Hopefully, it will be the last I spend in captivity.
Yours,
Edward Gibbon"
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Pott Shrigley!!!! Written by gerardconnolly (1186 comments posted) 11th December 2007 | Jean, would you believe it, I have just caught this and I know so much about Shrigley Hall. My two cousins were students for the priesthood there when it was the Salesian Missionary College. One went on to be Father Sean MacDiamarda. He died in Zambia of Malaria in 1992. God Rest His Soul.I have visited Shrigley often. And I know Pott Shrigley, Bollington, Disley etc. I often used to walk up White Nancy to look upon the Cheshire plains. It is a very special part of my life. The Salesians are no longer there, alas. I spent many happy summers there. I could tell you some stories about the old house; the Church and its farm. PM me when you read this. I have so many stories to tell. Love the narration. 'Tread softly least you tread upon my dreams'. Slan! | Written by Phil (6951 comments posted) 11th December 2007 | Clever way to bring a new source in Jean, and a good way to include some personal interaction for your main character. Still enjoying. Phil. | Written by Fledermaus (3470 comments posted) 12th December 2007 | | Ah yes, a new source rather than a law suit. Interesting. I hope you're careful here though, for your story could grow immensely now that you have both sides available... | Written by bluecity (432 comments posted) 12th December 2007 | The letter from Mrs Lowther was terrific! A real crusty Victorian lady, with lots of life. Another very sound piece of history from Edward. Am I now to believe that he has been transported to Australia? Well, I've now reached the last episode. Hope you don't find that I am being too critical. My philosophy is that people put their work up on sites like these, partly for others to proofread and, more importantly, to get a reaction. There is definitely a market for your sort of book. Julian Barnes "("Arthur and George") has done similar job, although he didn't use letters very much. I think, however, you need to consolidate your material more and not to write immediately after doing research. You need to develop your characters more. Margaret is coming along quite nicely. She is walking straight out of Cranford, actually. We can see her insecurities and her frustrations. But Edward has become just too saintly, so much the worthy stuffy social reformer. Scoundrels are actually more interesting to most people. Anyway, good luck. And I will look forward to your next. It's good to see that you are now putting up chapters on GW a little more slowly... Rosemary | Thanks Gerard,Phil,Fledermaus and Rosema Written by jean.day (2359 comments posted) 12th December 2007 | I think that I am actaully going to take this story in a completely different direction. And Margaret is going to become the main character rather than just being used to forward the story of the letters. No, Edward was not transported. He eventually moved to New Zealand, but I don't think he ever went to Australia. He talked to lots of the the convicts awaiting transportation, which is why he was so keen on letting people know how bad a system he felt it was. Rosemary, I almost always write about historical stuff - but I embroider it to suit my story - and I know I am treading on dangerous ground when I do so. But my writing is just my hobby - I have no allusions about it finding a wider audience than this one. And I always rewrite my material many times before I have a final version, keeping in mind the advice I have been given along the way. But I like to write quickly, when I am in the mood - and I like to post the work as soon as I have written it, so I think I will continue to do that, even if it seems too fast. | Written by Lizzy (827 comments posted) 15th December 2007 | I like your idea of concentrating more on Margaret and I'm looking forward to the meeting with the 'Lady of the Hall' Lizzy |
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