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Ode to George
By Dove
11 December 2007
A true story of love and loss.

You are gorgeous, that's a fact love. With your beautifully sculptured body, all my girlfriends are jealous.

Some of the boys too...


I know everyone thinks what they have is special, especially at our young age, but I know this is different. I'll love you forever.

I'll take the best care of you...


I'm proud to go out with you in public, to show you off. When people ask, I reply with contentment and a goofy smile,

"Yes, He's mine."


But it's not just superficial. My love is more than just skin deep. I tressure the time we spend together. I fell like we really connect.

Like you were made for me...


That day in the Car park ripped my heart in two. When I turned and turned and turned the key but you just would not start.

I cried while I waited for the tow-truck...


Oh, George. You're scrap metal now.


Reviews

Written by Jenog (3 comments posted) 11th December 2007
Thankyou for making me laugh.
Ode to George
Written by embro (126 comments posted) 13th December 2007
Nice One ! I really enjoyed this. Clever twist at the end but if you love him so much..... couldn't you try to have him fixed ?
to embro
Written by Dove (3 comments posted) 13th December 2007
yes, you are right. in reality "George" is in one piece and in my garage, but i thought it was more poetic if i ended it that way.  
also it's about teenagers and their first cars, and your first car tents to be a complete bomb, often they aren't worth fixing.

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