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| THE CUCKOO'S TALE (SCREENPLAY) PART 2 | |
| By Zarker | ||||
| 11 December 2007 | ||||
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Cut this from previous sub to make both a little smaller. EXT. KENNEDY AIRPORT - DAY
JP's large private jet comes to a halt on the ramp and a
Steps are quickly wheeled to the aircraft and the door
JP's four wives emerge looking around, holding hats to heads
Misty joins them but stands aloof, holding herself with
JP emerges deep in talk with his aide, looking up as a
JP ARRIVALS
The party -- complete with circle of bodyguards -- walk
JP
WIFE#2
JP
She stops, shooting a look at the ceiling. A rumpus breaks
JP There are shouts and tears as a couple get roughly arrested. His aide presses a few practiced keys on a palmtop.
AID
JP looks away with mild disgust and the party walk on, but
JP EXT. EXIT.
The party stroll through the doors being held open by INT. LIMO - LATER
JP gazes out of the window as they pass a park, with a few
JP
He turns to Misty who has her head in a book. He seems hurt
JP
WIFE#1
He taps her knee in thanks, then turns to Misty with more
JP
WIFE#2
WIFE#3
WIFE#4
JP
MISTY
JP
MISTY
Her fellow wives look at her with contempt. JP shows only
JP
MISTY
JP throws his head back and pulls at his hair with both
JP
He holds his hand out to her expectantly, and she reluctantly
JP He fondles the book in his hands.
JP
He lets them hold it. They pass it briefly from hand to hand
JP Two of them scrabble to be the first to obey.
JP
Gets out a cigarette lighter and sets fire to the pages. When
The burning book hits the windscreen of a parked wedding limo
JP Misty is close to tears.
Her four fellow spouses are all looking through the rear
WIFE#1
JP An alarm suddenly goes off, and JP comes close to panic.
JP
INTERCOM (V.O.) JP searches out of the windows then sees them. EXT. FITH STREET
Three tripod machines equipped with machine gun turrets strut
The escort APC skids into action as it accelerates towards BACK TO INT. LIMO
JP
INTERCOM (V.O.) JP looks around, a mixture of panic and frustration.
INTERCOM (V.O.) EXT. FITH STREET
Rocket fired from APC misses and detonates against a tower BACK TO INT. LIMO JP watches, unable to believe his eyes or his luck.
JP
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