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Foot in Mouth Dis-ease
By JFDeane
13 December 2007
I have to interact with this guy who's been working here for two weeks and he's Australian so to make him feel welcome I was addressing him in emails with 'Gday Brian', and he took offence to this, he's been a tad moody with me at the coffee area. I thought he may just fancy me because he is gay (VERY gay) and being moody because of it. I have just checked my sent items and when you put Gday through spell check (which I have been doing fast), it comes out Gay. I have been referring to him as Gay Brian, in serious work related emails. oopps?
what can I say to him too sort it out? My mate reckons I should give him a blowie… then give Brian one too?
 
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Written by JFDeane (1 comments posted) 13th December 2007
I hope this doesn't come across homophobic in any way. 
 
I see it doesn't tick any of the boxes below. lol 
 
but is it remotely funny?

Written by Bottleblondesurfer (3133 comments posted) 13th December 2007
OK I'll give you my reaction, here. It's not so much remotely funny, as potentially funny. You have just related an anecdote without crafting it into a humourous sketch. The humour is in how you craft it. It's source material for a sketch. You need to write the sketch around it. Ask,where's the humour here? 
--You could have a spell checker with attitude,who doesn't like you or a homophobic spell checker, or maybe a dyslexic one. 
--Perhaps he thinks you're gay [how would he react?] perhaps you have inadvertantly outed him to the office,etc etc. 
Just work out a scenario and run with it and then script it.

Written by Phil (6383 comments posted) 13th December 2007
Bottleblonde has nailed it. Much potential in this. Present state, just raw material. 
 
Phil

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