|
| READING ROOM | ||||
|---|---|---|---|---|
|
| COMMUNITY | |||
|---|---|---|---|
|
| ABOUT GREAT WRITING | ||
|---|---|---|
|
| WORK AWAITING REVIEW |
|---|
|
| GW IS... |
|---|
|
Great Writing creative writing community is designed to prompt ideas
and provide inspiration and motivation within aspiring and amateur
authors. Whatever your topic; from love poetry to Doctor Who or Harry
Potter fan fiction, Great Writing's online writing group is where you
can make new friends and improve your creative writing. |
| WHO'S ONLINE |
|---|
| We have 3181 guests online and 6 members online |
| print friendly version | |
| arrival | |
| By no1butClo | ||||||||||
| 13 December 2007 | ||||||||||
|
Do I need more of a connection between the first and second stanzas? Is it a load of rubbish brought on by so many long train journeys? Should I just give up and start writing proper poems? only YOU can say... so help! The twilight was luminous then swallowed in shadows and sitting on a bench I watch the platform turn to gold. The beating in my body won't slow down to keep time with the throb of a name in my head, and it's footsteps; heel-toe heel-toe they inch towards me and a place in my heart where I must have made room. At the station with a name and the trains in my ears, I feel the footsteps stop.
Only registered users can rate and write comments. Powered by AkoComment 2.0! |
||||||||||
|
|
Next item
|
|---|