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Written by Josie (2500 comments posted) 13th December 2007 |
| This is haiku isn't it Fledermaus. Quite difficult to write as i discovered. I'm not a great lover of it, but you have done this well. |
Written by Fledermaus (3159 comments posted) 13th December 2007 |
| Thanks Josie. A haiku indeed. :-) |
very nice
Written by Toad (99 comments posted) 14th December 2007 |
| the ideal haiku... one simple, yet juicy thought. No broken lines, either, like mine always have! |
Written by Fledermaus (3159 comments posted) 14th December 2007 |
Thanks Toad.
Probably the result of the last girl I had a crush on being sort of an archeologist, but somehow it seems the Lara Croft-factor does have its charm  |
Written by Fledermaus (3159 comments posted) 14th December 2007 |
Thanks Toad.
Probably the result of the last girl I had a crush on being sort of an archeologist, but somehow it seems the Lara Croft-factor does have its charm |
Written by audrie (444 comments posted) 14th December 2007 |
Did she find some gold
I know it's there inside you
But did she find it? |
Written by Fledermaus (3159 comments posted) 14th December 2007 |
Thanks Audrie.
Unfortunately
It will remain courtly love
She rejected me
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Written by Phil (6393 comments posted) 14th December 2007 |
Your heart's a tomb?
Never mind Fledermaus - there's plenty more fish in the sea.
Phil |
Written by Fledermaus (3159 comments posted) 14th December 2007 |
Thanks Phil.
LOL. Hadn't thought of it that way. Well, Tomb Raider seemed a suitable title until you came up with that comment 
You're right about the fish, but I'm very picky about which fish to choose. |
HI Fledermaus
Written by jean.day (2196 comments posted) 18th December 2007 |
A good Haiku. Sometimes the fewer words you use, the more meaning you get across.
As an archeologist, you will know that there are many more finds available. |
Written by Fledermaus (3159 comments posted) 19th December 2007 |
| Thanks Jean. I'm not an archeologist, she is |
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