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| Too Little Too Late | |
| By samiekins17 | ||||||||||
| 16 December 2007 | ||||||||||
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Those words he said to you made you see that he was more than meets the eye He says you're not pretty, not good enough for him That he could have anyone if he tried But does he honestly think anyone would want him after they see his true side? He tells you that you are beautiful That you are his everything Then he takes it all away He leaves you for his friends And goes off with another girl The tears hit the pillow as you cry over him Friends tell you every thing's alright but you know nothing will be the same Everything reminds you of him everywhere you go And you feel the pain that he caused you Wishing that you could go back before you knew him Tell him, no, let him feel the rejection Just let it go, move on, he's not even worth the time You can do better next time That's what your brain tells you But your heart says something else It feels like it's been ripped in two And there's nothing you can do to change that You feel the loneliness creeping up on you Pulling you down and making you cry You feel rejected from everyone and everything And you just want to die You feel as if the world has abandoned you So you don't feel like you should live You feel depressed and lonely So you push everything away You hide behind a hollow lie Put on fake smiles everyday So people don't see how you really feel But sometimes someone will see See the cuts on your arms and wrists See your puffy red eyes Hear your sobs from the bathroom Hear how you hate yourself and long for death They know that you're hurting And see what you are doing But they don't stop you Stop you from hurting yourself inside and out They don't tell anyone so they can get you help Soon it will be to late Too late to tell anyone Too late to try and help you Too late to tell you to stop That's when you will be nothing more than a memory A memory of a sad, depressed, lonely girl That took her life cause she couldn't take it anymore.
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