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Scoundrel or Saint - Chapter 12
By jean.day
20 December 2007
Just a short one this time, to add a transition. Also Edward didn't do much that was recorded during this year.


April 10, 1863

I have nothing specific to say about what I think my Pa would have written to Mr. Wakefield at this time.

I have decided to write to Catharine Torlesse, who I know to have been Edward’s younger sister. I know where she lives from a reference in a previous letter to my father.

She is married to the Vicar of the church in Stoke by Nayland, which Mr. Balshaw, my employer, tells me is near Colchester in Suffolk. I know that he had a high regard for her, and that she cared for his children when he was in prison.

If I tell her of my plan for the book and ask for her help in filling in the gaps in her brother’s life after 1845 when Pa last had letters from him, if she is alive and able, I think she will help me.

Ellen’s father, William Turner became an MP for Blackburn for the Whig party in 1832, but I expect Mr. Wakefield was well aware of that.

Here is Edward’s next letter to Pa, much shorter than usual. 

"February 8, 1832

Dear Daniel

Since I last wrote to you, I have had a bitter blow. My grandmother Priscilla, who was almost a mother to me, has died. I think I told you about her writing and all her good works.

It happened last September but I have not felt like writing anything since then. I do hope that before she died, she felt proud of me and my accomplishments. She certainly stood by me throughout my life, taking the rough with the smooth, and loved me despite my many failures to live up to her expectations. I do miss her so much. Why is it that all that I value is taken from me?


Yours faithfully, 

Edward Gibbon”

Reviews

Written by bluecity (418 comments posted) 20th December 2007
A very short one indeed. More about Margaret, who is getting more and more real every time. 
 
I have written you a private message as well. 
 
Rosemary

Written by Fledermaus (3448 comments posted) 20th December 2007
Short, but clear. It's nice to see how the 'friendship' between the two seems to grow, even though we only get to read one side of the conversation.
Thanks Rosemary and Fledermaus
Written by jean.day (2327 comments posted) 21st December 2007
I'm glad Margaret is coming across as being of interest. The original plan was for her not to matter at all - to only be a means to an end - but I think she will be taking over before long.

Written by Phil (6845 comments posted) 22nd December 2007
I'm glad Margaret is coming through too - it's important that she has some significance to carry the story. 
 
Moving on well. 
 
Phil

Written by Lizzy (822 comments posted) 22nd December 2007
He seems to have been truely fond of his aunt. 
Lizzy

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