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| By dylangrrl | ||||||||
| 27 September 2005 | ||||||||
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I am trying to get back into writing after a post-college hiatus and am looking for any feedback. Thank you. SKINFIELD There is a place on her ceiling That looks like a door plastered over And it is there that I focus When I am dissolving
I imagine there are fields beyond That door made of her skin And flowers that turn to watch me With her blue eyes
There are hills and valleys like the cleft Between her nose and lips And mountains like the Spine at the base of her neck
There is also a river of creamy White water that laps against Her skinfield and it is There that I wash when I open my eyes.
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