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Sinking feeling.
By Cameron
24 March 2005

More lyrics. This time I wanted to go for something more raw. This songs is just fueled by emotion. But not mine. The other member of the band is really depressed so I tired to relate to him by gettin myself down and angry and writing something.


Drowning in a pool of emotion,
Struggling, screaming and swallowing fear,
I'm asking for help,
Cant you hear?

There has to be something else,
Slowly dieing from lack of love,
I try but i cant hold on to anyone else,
They all fly away like a beautiful dove,

Hatred glazes my eyes,
I fall beneath the surface,
Severing my ties,
I dont feel the slightest nervous,

Drowning in a pool of emotion,
Struggling, screaming and swallowing fear,
I'm asking for help,
Cant you hear?

Cant you hear?

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Written by kevinrobson71 (42 comments posted) 10th April 2005

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