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| The Excrement Of Love | |
| By blogbrush | ||||||||||
| 22 December 2007 | ||||||||||
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Lord knows, I'm no poet. But I'm enjoying myself tremendously on this site at the mo and thought, why not. I've written poetry for as long as I could write but I've never taken it seriously or considered it a talent. Prose is my thing. Anyway, this is from a few years ago. Note the complete lack of metaphor. Dear me. Once, I watched you remove your bloody tampon And throw it across the floor. I found it very erotic. And once, when the tip of my nose turned volcanic, You pincered me with your fingers and you squeezed – All that puss! But you just ignored it. I remember once, as we laid dreamy and entwinded, You saw it fit to fart into my thighs – Giggle loudly, then softly sigh… Once, twice, so many times, We’ve excreted stuff of every kind, While the other greedily gorged - or laughed. Cleaned our teeth or held the others hair back. From every angle and in every shade, Our bumpy, imperfect bodies have lain In quiet comfort… But now, we pass as strangers in the street. Your hair tied-up; my hair combed neat. And it’s as though we never really got close to seeing, As though we never really got close to knowing, As though we never really got close to one another, At all.
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