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| Little Sister | |
| By Bonny | ||||||
| 25 December 2007 | ||||||
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Small and meek is she But loud and outspoken is her soul It's amazing how hurtful her anger can be Every moment ready for a duel I wonder of her thoughts and mind I really do care about her well being To her I must seem controlling, not at all kind Though I mean well she may think I'm not at all trying I may be wrong , so don 't take my word But she never listens to me Appearing to be bored When she 's old and wise She will see how wrong her notion of me may be She shall see I told few lies She will see the me I want her to see Her smile once used to be But now dull is her grin Though fun was what she used be Her laugh sounds like the echo in an old tin But when she has more years to show Her laughter will be as before When her eyes were as big as those of a doe She will be more light hearted when the teen years have passed When her image does not make up all of her And when that day comes I will have my little sister back at last
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the first verse is the strongest i think, 'it's amazing how hurtful her anger can be': yes, often because of how impotent you are rendered by being more 'mature' and how unmatched it can be. good stuff, i enjoyed learning about your feelings towards your sister.
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