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Boxing Day Blues -- repeated
By patterjack
26 December 2007
This  was  originally put  up  on  site  on 18th December 2006 .

Things  have  not  really  changed all  that  much  since  then--  except  that  the  piles  of  old  prawn heads and  oyster  shells  are  comparatively  bigger this  year.

And  I could  add  another  stanza  and  another plea :

               As we rush to consume our world
               showing a greed beyond all measure
               into Inferno we shall be hurled
               as we destroy all Nature's treasure.

                  Lord God  who would wish Earth's preservation
                  Imbue us with desire for conservation.


 Boxing Day Blues

 The gifts are given , the wrappings torn ,
 the relatives and friends have gone
 to leave me here, alone , forlorn
 with the washing up to gaze upon.

Lord God of Feasts , why can’t we eat
 the plates at the same time as the meat ?


 The Christmas crackers have all been pulled
 and given up their tawdry bits .
 Sometimes I think we’ve all been gulled
 and really need to call it quits.

 Lord God of Commerce , let’s be bold--
 Christmas is greatly oversold !


 I do not wish , without good reason
 to step outside the human race
 and denigrate the festive season
 by pulling such a mournful face

But Lord God of Time , I give a cheer
that Christmas comes but once a year.

Reviews
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Written by patterjack (1429 comments posted) 25th December 2007
Being over serious spoils the effect 
 
patterjack 

Written by Josie (2844 comments posted) 27th December 2007
I partly agree. I think we have all gone overboard with Christmas. It would be much more pleasant if it was simpler. It is simple in our house because I don't have any relatives who visit us, but the grandchildren come on boxing day and I'm afraid they're given much too much. I always feel better once we are in the New Year and getting back to a normal life.
re the additional stanza ...
Written by patterjack (1429 comments posted) 27th December 2007
... in the intro -- I feel that that was a tad over-serious as well as not in sync. with the general metre. 
 
My attitude of exasperation remains with Christmas in general -- ( do I hear a Scrooge-ish Bah! Humbug! brewing deep within me ? )  
 
patterjack
Christmas?
Written by fellpony (1702 comments posted) 27th December 2007
I cringe every year on being asked "are you ready for Christmas?" as though it were a race, or a disease. Like Josie, we have a private Christmas day and the kids and grandchild visit on Boxing Day. I refuse to be browbeaten into hysterics on this account :) Well said, Brian. When you consider how many religions have a virgin birth with a midwinter celebration, it's odd that commercialism is connected mainly to the Christian one.

Written by Phil (6951 comments posted) 27th December 2007
Like this Brian. We always have a family Christmas day - 10 of us this year. Very pleasant, but I'm always relieved when it's over and they're all gone. I enjoy the peace of Boxing Day. 
 
Absolutely nothing wrong with bah humbug - it's probably part of a yearning for a simpler life not hindered by great corporations - I'm all for that. 
 
Phil

Written by audrie (454 comments posted) 28th December 2007
I agree, nominally, with patterjack. Christmas has become so very commercialised that it appears to have lost it's original meaning. 
 
I suppose I am lucky in that, being alone, I get invited out so don't have to have the chore of buying in the enormous amounts of food and drink that seem to be necessary! 
 
Before Christmas, I drove from Sussex up to Oxfordshire, where we had a family pre-Christmas, with 5 adults and 3 grandchildren. Then back on 23rd(in all that dense fog) to friends, for Christmas Day and Boxing Day, with 9 adults and 5 grandchildren!  
 
The cost of the presents alone would have paid for a very nice holiday!! But mustn't be 'Scrooge-like'.Bah humbug!
If three ghosts visit thee tonight...
Written by Talisker (1331 comments posted) 28th December 2007
'tis thy own fault - ye old humbug b*stard! 
 
Merry yule & a great 008! 
 
Oli :)

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