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Midnight Mass
By hutmaster
27 December 2007
Been a long time since but the memories remain.

A tin-voiced priest shunted us
from sanctity of whispering porch
to chapel's transformed  belly.
Holier than us praised the Holy night,
rolled their eyes, prayed, praised.
We'd see them, pewed deep
and dense, maybe envied them their
wool-warm faith, their even voices.
Untouchable.

Our birthday present was our pesence and
the sacrificed last drinking hour.
We sought neither praise nor blessings
amongst the mumbling multitude.
Some confused, blood-borne sense
bade us come, oh come,
and, Magi like, we came,
paid our unsolemn dues
before skulking into silent night
feeling, in the cold promise of sleep,
a gift of belonging settle upon us.

Reviews
Hi
Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 27th December 2007
Yes, this well written piece does indeed bring back memories. 
Bernie

Written by fellpony (1700 comments posted) 27th December 2007
You caught that half-shamefaced lipservice that still satisfies the giver ... a telling last line.
How lucky am I...
Written by patterjack (1429 comments posted) 27th December 2007
... to be an atheist who has never had to suffer that hypocritical guilt of lipservice . 
 
patterjack

Written by jillrabbit (57 comments posted) 27th December 2007
Evocative poem. 
I think it is more than lipservice. It is keeping a door open, just in case it is ever needed. For others it is a way of reviving those childhood feelings about Christmas that are so inexorably bound up with the church. Sometimes we all need to belong somewhere, don't we? 
 
I love the phrase ' pewed deep and dense'.

Written by Phil (6951 comments posted) 27th December 2007
Liked the poem, though similar to PJ, glad I've escaped. 
 
Phil

Written by hutmaster (134 comments posted) 28th December 2007
Thank you all for the reads and comments. 
As the intro says it has been a long time since I attended at religious service but, as JR points out, the experience was something I am glad to have had. 
 
hm

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