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| A Race Day Drunk, Manoeuvering | |
| By petetheverse | ||||||||||||||||
| 01 January 2008 | ||||||||||||||||
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Words evoking a real event, at a pub near Haydock Park Racecourse one summer evening. A Race Day Drunk, Manoeuvering A drunk may not necessarily be a drunkard –
the latter has overtones of the alcoholic. This man was a drunk (he may, indeed, have been a drunkard) but in the paralysis of his drunkenness his movements were balletic –
almost. He was a tall, burly blonde man in his forties, smartly-dressed –
perhaps an icon in his own environment.
but absolutely no control – of his manoeuverings.
in a pas-de-trois – himself, his drunken self and alcohol –
his cajoling arms were semaphoring the approaching traffic to slow down – to leave him space for his unplanned, untutored, unexpected, unsuspected waywardnesses.
in the mirror can be seen the brake lights, the impatience of the queuing traffic, while still he teeters to the applauding jeers of other drinkers, salving their daytime racing losses – or burnishing their winnings – in the evening sunshine.
tries to find his bearings amidst the catcalls, the angry horns, the five- foot pavement he attempts to mount.
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