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Spider
By punchy
02 January 2008
I think you need to be 3 to appreciate this one but I'll post it anyway Embarassed



          There's a spider in the bath tub,          
He's cunningly disguised,
In the overflow he's hiding,
I think I saw his eyes,

I know he wants to eat me,
He's weaving up his web,
He'll reel me in and spin me,
And squeeze me till I'm dead .



Surprised

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Written by ianhobsonuk (158 comments posted) 3rd January 2008
I liked it, though I'm 56 - just wished that it was longer. 
 
ian

Written by Lizzy (783 comments posted) 3rd January 2008
I agree with Ian and I'm just a little bit older (a child at heart maybe?) 
Lizzy

Written by Josie (2721 comments posted) 3rd January 2008
Excellent Paula. I have to admit that if I lived alone, I don't know how I would cope as I can't cope with big spiders. Isn't it silly? I keep telling myself that they are more frightened of me - but it doesn't help.

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