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| How to behave when waiting (Things my Mother taught me) | |
| By jillrabbit | ||||||||||||||||
| 03 January 2008 | ||||||||||||||||
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Many visits as a child to places where I had to wait outside quietly, as I'd been taught... Needless to say, I wait very impatiently now! Distantly, 'I won't be long' she goes. The corridor lengthens with each echoing click of her heels As I sit squirming but attached firmly. Watching, waiting, gaze drawn to the floor where Slow motion motes dance in the sun's rays The silence more than I can bear. So, feet swinging rhythmically, Chair-creaking boredom sets in. My space is a soundproofed island invaded by muffled talk crawling out uneasily, under the door to reach ears straining with the effort to understand. My patience shrinks to a knot in my stomach Then silence is shattered by small talk I crane my neck to see Through a forest of legs and laughter Simpers and handshakes, Her smile comes down to rescue me Nods her reward and reaches down With an unspoken 'Good girl for waiting quietly'
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