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A First Sight Of Death
By petetheverse
05 January 2008
Innocence doesn't last long



 

 

A First Sight Of Death


An inquisitive sparrow

Happens into the room

Through an opened french door;

For the sun shines mightily

And the air is utterly still.

 

 

The wall is all window

– To admit of the day

The sashes are lowered

– But the vista is only

Half daylight, half glass.

 

 

Silence floods through the room

And fills it with light;

Broad-breasted, the bird struts and noses,

When, sudden and rushing, into

The stillness erupts a small child.

 

 

In horror and panic the sparrow

Is airborne. Headlong for safety,

Its skull implodes thud on the glass;

A death self-inflicted, in innocence,

The concept of glass beyond understanding.

 

 

Bloody and warm, its body

Lies limp in the palm of a hand;

A just-clammy hand stricken cold

By the conscience that stares

At a blood-streak which hangs in the air.

Reviews
Hi
Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 5th January 2008
A good piece of writing is this, enjoyed the read. 
Bernie
Very sad
Written by Josie (2844 comments posted) 5th January 2008
I can well relate to this. We seem sometimes to live in a life/death conflict with birds. We've had a family of starlings who nest in our chimney who used regularly to fall down into the room. (Put a top on the chimney now). We have marks on our French windows where they have hit them. We heard such a thump the other day when a hawk was trying to knock out his victim - a pigeon - on the window. We managed to save the pigeon but he was falling about like a drunkard. We've just had a bluetit who insists on coming into our garage for the night and panic sets in if we go into the garage. You have written this very well, and we can feel as well as see the picture in our minds.

Written by audrie (454 comments posted) 5th January 2008
I guess we've all had this experience and the child's bewilderment at the sudden life force being snuffed out, but children, fortunately, have butterfly minds and can soon be distracted. 
 
Good poem.

Written by jillrabbit (57 comments posted) 5th January 2008
A beautifully written piece, PTV. Your poem made me realise what I like about reading the poems on this site. You get instantly transported to a place with atmosphere. In yours I could feel the heat and stillness of the room (in utter contrast to our reality at the moment) before the tragic demise of the bird.  
I remember my mother used to say a bird in the house was an omen of death; unfortunately the bird in this case.

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