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| By punchy | ||||||||||||
| 05 January 2008 | ||||||||||||
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Wrote this for my local toy shop but chickened out of giving it to them. On the A13, In Westcliff On Sea Past the second hand shop and the park with the trees, On the left if your walking In an easterly direction, Is a shop that sells toys An amazing selection It has a big window and some toys outside it Like a slide and a swing and a big pile of sand pits It's a toy shop and post office All mixed together And when you walk in It goes on forever It's how a shop should be, the people are kind They offer there help when there's stuff you can't find As I walk through My tummy goes jumpy A cave full of treasure All shouting out buy me I run to the back Where the big stuff is hiding Scooters and tricycles, Stuff made for climbing I head to the left and from floor up to ceiling There's hundreds of dolls, Some talking some breathing There's one that does wee wees,that ones my favourite My mum thinks its silly and won't let me buy it I want to have every toy in that shop And if money no object I would buy the lot Once I have checked out The Barbies and games My mum starts to rush me It's always the same I start to panic what shall I get I want to stay looking I'm getting upset My mum says "lets leave it" But I need to buy She tugs on my arm, So I start to cry It always works well When I pull on her heart strings She feels all guilty And then gets me 2 things We head to the counter, I'm skippy and pleased Cos I've got a ball and a baby that wees The people that work there, I know what they're thinking They liked my performance that's why they're winking So when I'm behaving, and making no noise Please will you take me to Argosy toys
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