so if it's shit just tell me but the silence is more unbearable than the poem itself!

My heart is a cave of darkness,
where empty souls are captured,
Then left abandoned an untouched

The cavity of hope is lost in that blackness,
together with emotional charge
and any form of energy or motivation

The faint whispers of feelings
that tentatively appear are shrouded in defensive barriers
 unbreakable by love or attention,

 For the ice has encompassed my whole being,
 as it builds and grows colder its innards slowly
 decay.....  now I am stone.