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LIFE......................ITS BEAUTIFUL
By aparajitha
09 January 2008
Life is like a rose, beautiful,
But, full of thorns;
Life is like the gushing rain, which quenches our thirst
But leaves us flooded,
Life is like sun, which gives us light,
But parches our throat with thirst;
Nevertheless, LIFE is God's gift,
which, all are expect'd to live to the fullest,
on thorns, in flood and drought.

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Written by Karenhoffen (37 comments posted) 11th January 2008
Excellent use of similes and great ending

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