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| The Hills Are Alive. | |
| By maipenrai | ||||||||||||||||
| 09 January 2008 | ||||||||||||||||
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a bit different is this one, an experiment, well, lets see how it goes. The Hills are alive with the sound of gunfire, screaming boys and radio calls, the whirling blades blow up a dust storm, just another day in Helmond. "Hello Alpha Charlie this is Mike Charlie One, over" "Alpha Charlie send ,over" " Mike Charlie One request P1 medevac soonest, over" "Alpha Charlie send details, over" "Mike Charlie One six P1 casulitys break times 2 gsw head, times 1 ta left leg break times 1 ta right arm, times 2 blast injurys, over" "Alpha Charlie wait "Hello Mike Charlie One this is Alpha Charlie, over" "Mike Charlie One send, over" "Alpha Charlie medevac due your location in figures one five, I say again figures one five, over" "Mike Charlie One roger" "Alpha Charlie out" a fictional radio conversation between a medic in the field and his/ her base support group. Explanation P1, Priority One Evacution, a serious life threatning injury Medevac, Medical Evacution, in this case by helicoptor Break, a pause in a radio conversation to enable the receiving station time to take down details. GSW, Gun Shot Wound. TA, Traumatic Amputation
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