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| Tortured Soul | |
| By latepaul | ||||||||||||
| 12 January 2008 | ||||||||||||
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This is my first (so far only) ghost story. Comments welcome. I am the spirit of fear and pain. I lie waiting to inflict torment. I am a shade, a shadow, a faded imprint of a horror unspoken. A horror with which I haunt this place. I am the spirit of fear and pain. It is what I must do. * * * He feels it as he nears the door, both feels and fears my presence. It is only a moment's pause as he turns the key-- a flicker of unease--but it is there. If I could smile I would. He enters and walks slowly, deliberately down the hall, not looking up. There is a patch of ceiling that is darker than the rest, though not through any lack of light. It is not I, who am here and yet not, it is merely the way my presence sours the air. Nevertheless he will not look at it. He will not look, yet does not know that I look through his eyes. His thoughts are open to me as the night outside is open. I am not trapped by walls or flesh and bone. He hangs up his jacket and puts on another, an old coat stained from work and sad memory. Feeling in the pocket he finds hard reassuring metal. He is preparing, so must I. He walks toward the cellar door and now I am the space surrounding it. I thicken the air and strengthen my will. He shall not pass. He pauses, grasping again that pocketed tool which seems to give him courage. I must not relent. He has will and a purpose but so do I, and I intend to frighten him from his course. I weigh down on him like a heavy cloak, like a shroud I cover his head with darkness. There is a moan, not him, but coming from below. He yells “shut up!”, and I am almost dislodged by the force of his anger. As he descends the stairs, I envelop him with my terror, embracing him about with all my impure energies. I delve into his memory to stir up demons-- a childhood's pain and uncertainty, a youth forgotten and uncared-for, a man maligned and misunderstood. I wrap him in these illusions of things past, visions of that which hurt him. I want to make him feel it again. I want him to feel. But he has iron in him, a mettle born of hatred. A hatred I can see, it is purple and red and on fire in his fingertips. His mind is calm and clear but his heart is overflowing with a hunger to taste this evil. When he reaches the spot where his latest victim is chained to the wall, it is I who falter while he remains sure. He takes out the knife. Its touch has been his surety, his steadfastness. The blood begins to flow and I am undone. I am the spirit of fear and pain, and once again they fill me completely.
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