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Did the Earth Move For You, Darling? (True story)
By ianhobsonuk
13 January 2008
A true story from Turkey.

 

 © 2003 Ian Hobson


It was rumoured that, within two days, some enterprising Turkish businessman had tee-shirts, printed with the words ‘I SURVIVED THE MARMARIS EARTHQUAKE', on sale - though we never actually saw any.


It happened during our second Turkish holiday. During the first, two years earlier, we'd not felt even the slightest tremor. I even recall being a little disappointed at the time, because a friend had told us that there was a good chance that we would.


Once again we were staying in Icmeler in south-west Turkey, smaller and quieter than the major resort of Marmaris, just a couple of miles along the coast. We love the way Icmeler nestles into the surrounding pine-clad hillsides, and the curve of the bay, and the way that the small islands that surround it give it a lakeside feel. It's a great place to relax and watch the world go by; most of it going by in the small boats and water taxis that chug over to Marmaris and back with their red Turkish flags flapping in the breeze.


And, of course, Turkey is a vast country, stuffed with history and many historical sites well worth visiting. And by the middle of our second week we had visited several, not least Pamukkale to the north, where we swam in The Great Thermal Baths - an old Roman bath, complete with tumbled down marble pillars and crystal-clear mineral water that bubbles above and below the surface like champagne.


Not that we were done with sightseeing. We had another excursion planned for the next day, and had arranged an early call to be sure of not missing the coach that was to collect us at 6.30am. But as it turned out, we didn't need the call when it came; we had already had one at 4am.


You might think that being woken in the early hours by a giant who shakes your bed from side to side, whilst his cavernous belly rumbles, would leave you at a loss to know what was happening. But like they say in job advertisements: previous experience is not essential. We knew exactly what it was: an earthquake.


It was still dark outside, but there was enough light in the bedroom to see that the electric light fitting was swinging, and that the freestanding wardrobe was not so much free to stand, as free to rock about as though auditioning for Disney's Fantasia. We heard something fall and hit the bathroom floor, and outside something made of glass shattered as it hit the concrete. By now, without instruction from me, my left hand had set off across the bed and met my wife's right hand coming the other way. We lay there, hand in hand, half fascinated and half frightened, until it stopped, suddenly, as though somewhere in the earth's basement a switch had been thrown and a circuit broken. The light fitting continued to swing to and fro.


The quake - a 5.3 on the Richter scale, we later learned - had lasted only seven seconds. And for as many seconds after, there was silence until it was broken by the sound of doors being opened, and voices, and footsteps on the stairway. I got out of bed and reached for something to cover my nakedness before stepping out onto the balcony. We were on the second floor, and I heard a female voice below say, ‘Do you think we should wake everyone up?' I leaned over the balustrade and said ‘I think you'll find they're already awake.'


Most of the guests seemed to be leaving the building and were gathering around the bar and swimming pool. But I went back through to the bedroom, where my wife was still in bed, and climbed in beside her, knowing that if I was too scared to go back to bed, that I'd be too scared to go to bed the following night and for the rest of the holiday. There was an aftershock then, as the janitor in the earth's basement made and then broke the circuit once more; just to make sure that fear still lurked in our minds.


For a while, we clung to each other, and then tried to go back to sleep but, of course, we couldn't. So we were up in plenty of time for the coach, which was late. When finally it arrived and we set off, there were further delays, as people who were supposed to be waiting outside their various hotels and apartments were not there; having decided to abandon the trip, and in some cases the rest of their holiday.


On the coach, our guide, whose name was Hamdi, was studying a map, much of which, I noticed, was coloured red. I asked him what the red colouring meant - though I had a good idea - and he explained that the red areas, which included Marmaris and Icmeler, were known to be earthquake-prone. I advised him to keep that information to himself.


Our trip, to Fethiye and Oludeniz, went well, despite all the talk of the earthquake and the Wimbledon train crash, which by coincidence had happened the same morning. And what was left of the holiday went well too. Though going to bed at night required a certain amount of courage, especially as many of the locals were sleeping in their gardens or on their boats. We learned this from a family who lived near our apartments; as walking back from the town each evening, we would find them sitting outside in the street; and typical of the Turks, they'd offer us a seat and some apple tea, and we'd sit a chat with them for a while.


Their fears, of course, were increased by knowledge of more severe earthquakes that had happened in the north earlier in the year; quakes that had destroyed towns and killed and injured many people. By comparison the Marmaris earthquake had been small; the only injuries caused by panic, as a few people jumped from first-floor windows and balconies.


It was already October, and we wondered what our Turkish neighbours would do when the cold and wet weather arrived. We would soon be going home - well tanned and with a story to tell - but sooner or later they too would have to overcome their fear and sleep indoors.


So... would we go back to Turkey? You bet! And would we like to experience another earthquake? Err, no thanks. We've been there, done that and, well no, we didn't actually buy the tee-shirt.
 

*****


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Reviews

Written by Phil (6645 comments posted) 13th January 2008
Nicely rounded piece, Ian. Well written, simply put, you allow the reader to picture your experiences. 
 
Perhaps more at home in non-fiction than here - but I don't suppose it matters much. 
 
Phil
Thanks, Ian!
Written by Bagheera (680 comments posted) 13th January 2008
:grin Pleased to hear from someone who enjoyed a holiday in Turkey! 
I only ever went there once (working for an oil drilling company) and my clearest memory is the double line of soldiers between plane and terminal: I swear some of the weapons were OLDER than the kids carrying them!! :eek  
 
Haven't forgotten the 'proofing' I offered you, but I've been busy ... will try to PM you soon with suggestions. 
Meanwhile, if you want to be picky ........... !! 
Purists would frown on the idea of STARTING a sentence with either "AND" or "BUT" .... nothing important, but I was a teacher for many years and we notice these things!! :grin

Written by Asferthecat (824 comments posted) 13th January 2008
Interesting story - I liked the way it started and ended with T-shirts. Probably sleeping outside was a good idea - damaged buildings can collapse with aftershocks and I doubt if Turkish holiday hotels are well built. 
Can you still swim in that Roman spring? I saw a documentary about it being closed. I remember it from the 1960s when it was in the middle of nowhere, with nothing built around it - magic. 

Written by Josie (2732 comments posted) 14th January 2008
For your information Ian:  
"There are about 200 quakes each year in Britain, but only 10 per cent are strong enough to be felt". We've had them in Ilkley - yes - but they have been felt at the same time in other parts of the country. I think the last time was a couple of years ago. We had clothes hangers clanging in the wardrobe. It was about 7.30 am. Liked your story, but the way you wrote it had a lot to do with it. 

Written by Fledermaus (3238 comments posted) 18th January 2008
Nice story. Just why is it in short stories if it's non-fiction? Must be both fascinating and a little scary to experience an earthquake. My uncle once went to Taiwan, just after one had happened and wanted to go hiking in the mountains. The Taiwanese advised him not to though.
Yes, both fascinating and scary
Written by ianhobsonuk (158 comments posted) 23rd January 2008
Thanks for the reviews. 
Turkey – Pamukkale - As far as I know, it’s still possible to swim in the pool, though not in the small pools on the hillside. Info: http://www.sacred-destinations.com/turkey/hierapolis-pamukkale.htm 
Why in Short Stories? Well, it’s a story, and it’s short - and when I wrote it I didn’t think of it being anything other than a short story meant to entertain; it just happened to be a true one. 
 
Ian 

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