Written in 2002; but equally, in 1982, 1892, 1642; whenever.
GLASTONBURY TOR
Seen distantly,
The eyes and thoughts are drawn persistently
To this ancient, noble pinnacle;
There can be no refusal
To respond to its low, persuasive call.
It is early spring.
Listen to the song of birds, which sing
Not just of now, but of the past they know,
Of the surging centuries which flow
So fast but still beneath the earth below.
Even God himself would strain his mind
To enumerate and illustrate
Such a pulsing throng of human kind,
Whose unnumbered feet have trod this hill;
Whose unnumbered eyes interpreted with skill
This all-encompassing, entrancing view.
And here are paramount
No binoculars or telescopes –
Which those unsighted raise
With eternal expectation
To their cataracted, granite eyes;
For were they but aware,
They need only to inhale – of an air
So pure – to sense the distillation
Of each preceding generation.
But also, here, the blind barbaric armies
Of an ambitious, reforming king
Hung, drew and quartered
A gentle abbot
– his gentleness was in his very calling.
From here, as death drew near, he perceived
The blue-bright promised skies
As his bequest, and embracing death, believed.
Unfettered from the chains of mortal agonies
At the last his soul escaped;
For the moment fragile, it fluttered free; and flew.
Just as these birds, now,
With their slow, enduring certainty,
Encircle endlessly,
Singing ancient messages – anew.
Dedicated to Richard Whiting, the last Abbot
of Glastonbury, executed for his faith in 1539.
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Written by Josie (2844 comments posted) 16th January 2008 |
| I have to say that I really loved this poem Pete. I have written a non fiction article about "the thin places" - and Glastonbury Tor is one of them. They are places where the veil between earth and heaven are thin. You did well with your descriptions. |
Written by margarita (30 comments posted) 16th January 2008 |
Hi there I really enjoyed reading this piece. Your mix of the spiritual and the feudal is excellent but you also send us right to the top of the tor with your soaring descriptions. There is something very special about the Tor and you've captured some of the indescriabable feelings quite aptly here.. Lovely M |
Written by petetheverse (164 comments posted) 16th January 2008 |
Hi, Thank you both - each time I have been there I have been enraptured, and in fact this piece was written the very first time I climbed it. PTV |
Written by petetheverse (164 comments posted) 16th January 2008 |
Hi, again, I was prompted to post it because by some strange urge I picked up a book of short stories by Gogol the other day, and found that I must have been carrying it with me at the time I first climbed the Tor; because the two original drafts of this are written inside the fly leaves; moral - always have a notebook with you! PTV |
Written by Veronica_Milvus (746 comments posted) 2nd February 2008 |
| I was not so taken with the first half but the second half was stunning. A feeling of the gentleness of the nurdered abbott was very clear. |
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