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Them Downstairs
By maipenrai
17 January 2008

a bit of fun


Them Downstairs,
right queer folk are
them downstairs.

He says he works for Pru
but only seems to work at night,
when he's away
Her downstairs is always
inviting me down for tea,
just for a nibble she says,
a nibble here, a nibble there
just a bit of fun she says.

aye,
right stange folk are
them downstairs.

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Her downstairs
Written by Josie (2844 comments posted) 17th January 2008
He works at night - and is she working at night too? Only I was thinking that there might be a link with Embro's woman - - - oh no! She's upstairs isn't she? Well, I have to agree - right strange! I'd advise you to keep away from her nibbling - and Embro also. Better safe than sorry.

Written by embro (126 comments posted) 17th January 2008
I think a gambling man might take a shot at a 'nibble'... just to check out waht she means ! 
A good fun piece.. A good titter eh ? 
embro

Written by Fledermaus (3477 comments posted) 17th January 2008
Uhuh... Just tea?

Written by Josie (2844 comments posted) 17th January 2008
Fledermaus doesn't trust any of them you see. Quite right.
Hi
Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 20th January 2008
Josie,Embro, Fledermaus Thank you all for your comments. 
Bernie
Yup
Written by beatricelouise (215 comments posted) 25th January 2008
When the cat's away, the mice will play. :grin
HI Beatricelouise
Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 26th January 2008
and thank you for your comments. 
Bernie

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