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Poetry
untitled
By faye
05 October 2005

I am a novice when it comes to poetry but i enjoy writin,g i dont really

class my untitled as poetry im not sure what catagory to put it in as it is largely in rhyme, i hope you enojy reading it.


Some people say dont hold on to regret

Forget the past and move onto the next

But what happens when the person you've become isnt who you planned to be

and how you got there is more than a clouded mystery

When you wake up and realise that your way off track

be sure in the knowledge that you can change your own map

dont keep the hate close it only leads to the bad

you are worth more than that

so make sure you are heard.

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heart felt
Written by sheppard (36 comments posted) 11th October 2005
Hi 
I really liked this as I said before, I get very deflated with negative reviews, but I suppose it has to happen, prob I was brought up with the, If you can't say anything nice, don't say anything, but I suppose we are in a changing world, and everyone is entitled to their opinon. 
So we will carry on regardless. 
Well done. 
Gald you like the Poem about the soldier, I have just sent it to my parents, its going to be read out on Rememberence day at their club. 
Best wishes

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