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Rising to Audrie's Challenge - a Limerick
By Josie
24 January 2008





                     The poets from Yorkshire are best

                     That’s where I come from – you’ve guessed

                              Though words can get tangled –

                               Like your smalls  in the mangle

                    Phew – Finished.!  That’s a load off my chest.

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Written by stevetroster (1549 comments posted) 24th January 2008
Rose to the challenge, but crashed and burned! 

Written by Fledermaus (3238 comments posted) 25th January 2008
Yes. Yorkshire seems to be a factory where they produce poets and writers ever since... Well, the Viking age I presume.
To Steve - and Fledermaus
Written by Josie (2732 comments posted) 25th January 2008
Steve: In answer to your kind remark: Quite the opposite, in fact. I won a bet which was: Write a limerick (or poem) which would encourage a review from Stevetroster. You've just won for me £500. My challenge to you is this: You can only say that I have failed by producing something better yourself, with perfect rhyme and rhythm, and whereas this took me two minutes, I will give you a day. We all on GW look forward to your limerick with interest, and since mine wasn't rude to you, please respect me a little too.  
 
Fledermaus: Yes, Yorkshire ale is behind what you said. ha ha. 'Tis well known. That's why the cricketers and footballers are good too.
Actually,
Written by audrie (444 comments posted) 25th January 2008
it was a challenge from mad_uncle_jack. I wish someone would pay me £500 to write a Limerick! Lucky you! 
 
I'll put my two minutes worth on so people can see what we are talking about!
To Audrie
Written by Josie (2732 comments posted) 25th January 2008
Don't you know that poets are notorious story-tellers? £500? Don't tell the taxman. I would be so lucky. Poetry and money don't seem to go hand in hand for me. But it might get Steve thinking.

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