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By Phil
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26 January 2008 |
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A lady, undressed, in Tadcaster
Went down on her grateful old master.
Being soft to the core,
But panting for more -
He demanded she bounce even faster. |
Written by Talisker (1326 comments posted) 26th January 2008 |  |
Written by gothboy805 (1 comments posted) 26th January 2008 | Were you trying to write in the style of the late, great Benny Hill? I don't get. To me, the writing is short and shallow and lacks intelligent thought and design. In the US, this would entertain young teenage boys...or be found written on a the wall of a bathroom (WC)...that's about it. Are adults in England entertained by this stuff?
How's this one?
Please someone hand me a noose
or a fork to poke out each eye
to prevent me from reading more lymerics,
because I'd rather be blind than die.
...short and shallow, but witty with a bit of an edge.
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Written by Phil (6730 comments posted) 27th January 2008 | Guilty on most charges - Benny Hill didn't enter my head though.
I guess some adults in the UK are entertained by this sort of thing. Perhaps we're an immature nation - at least the ones who are entertained.
I quite liked yours, as it goes. Didn't need the label though.
To save your eyesight, I'd avoid the Post-Viagra Limerick. It's even more infantile and definitely shallow - but I had more fun writing it.
Phil | Are adults in England entertained by thi
Written by fellpony (1616 comments posted) 27th January 2008 | | Yes Gothboy - just occasionally we prefer a good laugh to being bored silly by teenage angst and social conscience. It makes for a more balanced view. | Wow!
Written by ErikaRain (7 comments posted) 29th January 2008 | | This is a dirty Limerick! But it's interesting. |
Written by punchy (500 comments posted) 11th March 2008 | | Fantastic |
Written by Diddi (80 comments posted) 11th March 2008 | | More please. I'm starved for dirty Limericks. Clerihews too. |
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