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| Time and Disappointment | |
| By devonwelsh | ||||
| 27 March 2005 | ||||
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I wrote this about how I see the world working. Time goes by so slow these days I can almost watch the trees moving Silently, back into the earth
Sometimes I can't even remember How many of my dearest friends Have been taken, by the promise of Total consciousness or whatever else Timothy Leary had to say
How many have fallen, seeing visions Always turning, looking behind their Backs for something, something that Is never there
I'm sure for one second they saw the whole Picture and it scared them more than anything In the world, and so they tucked it away And now they're gone, taken by a false dream
If God existed, he wouldn't allow people To live their lives with false ideals, with grand Illusions of total control and enlightenment With images of a savior blocking the exit sign
If God existed I'd tell him to fuck off, Because he made a world so full of beauty and Despair, sometimes I can't take it all, sometimes I need a break
There are too many prophets with the answer Too many corporate demy-gods, too many Unfeeling well-wishers, looking through The glass into a life their glad they don't Have to deal with
Too many aching souls, living in a cage Too many suns that have never been able To even let out the smallest glimpse of light Too much death, too much greed Too many life-hungry addicts, dying to breathe Too many empty streets, filled to the brim With empty memories
And there is too little of a fucking chance For anyone with a dream of peace or of life Or for anyone with a hope that someone They love will stay alive, and nothing Wrong will ever come to them or the Things that hold dear
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