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| blue skys | |
| By sarahh | ||||||||
| 27 January 2008 | ||||||||
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Elements of the Earth is like mixed messages paddling along a row boat. The row boat is headed for a water fall, a ninety degree drop dead. Direr situations must be kept lightly but never forgotten, always learning. Tropical Breeze swept through this town like a mysterious gang of wolves. That howled at the moon, but it brought a sudden peace to our old neighbors. They seemed to be young again, like they won a prize. That seem to change their lives. The next day two ambulances came, and gave them a ride. I saw a group of teenagers and they were playing with fire. Like they usually do. But this fire was different, it seemed to be making the air colder, then it started to rain. It rained for many days an nights till it stopped all of a sudden and blue sky ran the atmosphere over. Everybody stopped their cars, got out of their houses, in their offices, the all ran to the windows. Everyone stopped what they were doing, the city shut down and everyone stared at the sky. Blue skies is what is holding up their heads. As just as soon as it happened everybody continued in their busy life but now with a sense of reason.
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