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So Maybe This is Hell...
By rilLie
27 January 2008
hmm. Haven't written in a while, I apologize. ^^; I've been more into visual arts lately, and I see that my last post was last August, I think. So yeah. :) High school's been nice so far, and my freshman year will be over in two months, come March. I feel old. :|
anyway, I hope you like this piece, I haven't written in quite a while, so it's quite rusty. :P

Don't ask if you dazzle me,
coz my answer's quite frank:
yes, yes, yes, you do --
frequently, in fact.

So maybe this is hell.
But I really don't care.
If you stay, I don't need heaven,
if you aren't even there.

I'm not sure if you hear me,
or if  yes, what you will do.
But I just needed to say
that I'm crazy about you.

<3

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Hello RiLie
Written by Josie (2844 comments posted) 27th January 2008
Thanks RiLie - I'm also crazy about you too and we have missed you on GW. I've been branching out into artwork too. See the poem above. But I'm afraid that it has caused me a lot of "bovver". Nice to see you back.

Written by Fledermaus (3470 comments posted) 27th January 2008
Nice one. And welcome back.
Hi again rilLie
Written by Talisker (1331 comments posted) 27th January 2008
Welcome back. 
 
There is something refreshingly unpretentious, gentle and innocent in this little poem. 
 
I remember that your other work was similar. The naturalness is sweet and the subject matter undemanding. I like. 
 
Oli :)

Written by rilLie (328 comments posted) 28th January 2008
Josie~ thank you. ^__^ I'm glad to be back. :D I'll be posting more when summer comes. :mrgreen: 
 
Fledermaus~ Thank you. :'DD 
 
Oli~ Thanks so much~! :'DD

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