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Sri Lanka Blue
By maipenrai
27 January 2008

She had come down from the hills,
come down from Kandy
to tell me of her life and times,
talk to me of Sri Lanka Blue.

of the never ending war
the killing and rape,
mass graves and tears
tigers and soldiers in the night
of those taken , never to return,of
the great wave
that washed away so many and the
fighting and greed that followed,
she sang to me of Sri Lanken Blue,
she held my hand and asked
me to pray for all those
who have been forgotten,
I promised I would not forget.

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Written by Josie (2844 comments posted) 27th January 2008
God bless you Bernie - you were there as a good listener when she probably needed someone just to listen.

Written by DressedInPoetry (23 comments posted) 27th January 2008
Beautiful.  
 
I'm pretty sure that is the only word that I can think to say right now, because this is just beautiful.
Hi
Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 28th January 2008
Josie, Dressedinpoetry and thank you both for your comments. 
Bernie
hey
Written by Azka123 (3 comments posted) 3rd February 2008
that's good poem. Its like you are very well listener and cared. We can just pray for peace. beautiful.
Hi Azka
Written by maipenrai (784 comments posted) 14th February 2008
first my apologies for the delay in getting back to you, and thank you for your review. 
Bernie

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