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Don't Waste Time
By audrie
27 January 2008
As a prime time-waster, devouring books instead of writing, this is more directed at myself, but will probably ring a bell in other folk.

The first verse was in an old autograph book of my mother's, circa 1920 - 30. Does anyone know if it part of a longer poem?

Minutes are but little things,
Each one gifted with sixty wings,
They fly away on an unbidden track
And never a minute ever comes back.

As minutes take flight, the hours roll on
And turn into days which are rapidly gone.
Have they been used, these segments of Time?
Or do you sit dreaming of glory sublime?

Before you're aware a year has gone by,
And all of your dreams are still pie in the sky.
The book still unwritten, the poems not read.
A few bits were published but nothing that led...

To fame and to fortune and money in the Bank.
The time that you wasted, it just drew a blank.
Writers are dreamers, don't like to engage
In actually putting the words on a page.

So don't waste precious minutes, or hours, or days.
Get on with the hard graft, and soon you'll be praised
For the best-selling book that is filling the stores,
And which you're now signing - is YOURS!

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Written by Josie (2721 comments posted) 27th January 2008
Audrie: It's a good job I looked at what you are writing:  
"Writers are dreamers, don't like to engage 
In actually putting the words on a page." ha ha. Have you seen the number of poems I've posted on this website in the last 2 years? Oh yes, you are just reminding the others. I see. OK then. Goodbye. 
 
Josie
Written by audrie (444 comments posted) 28th January 2008
I know what a prolific writer you are, I think you have a Rumplestiltskin hidden away in a back room!! 
 
I did say in the foreword that it was aimed at people like me, who will not get on with it! 
 
Judging by the number of poems some people put on there are many like you, who churn them out. Well done to you.

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