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| By margarita | ||||||||||
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definitely a work in progress....there's something there that I'm trying to describe....but it's really difficult! Hope you find somehting you like in it. And now that it has happened one can just stretch out And chew on the chain reaction of the butterfly effect, Lazy and full from late nights drinking, loving Wrapped up in our own small world that we ourselves concocted It's sweet and bashful and crafted honesty. Something ancient and divine about ourselves urges us to linger longer. Stay a while, stay away from those trivial other-worldly tasks. Eye to eye, trying to find my way in those towering deeppools I try to trace your smile with my toungue I catch those shifty whispers through the sheets, And all the sound creeps out of the room And its just you- Laughing, Breathing.
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