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| The Unfeeling Kiss | |
| By DressedInPoetry | ||||||
| 29 January 2008 | ||||||
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The music plays softly. The reverberating notes Echo across the crowded room, Cutting into the silence between the couple At table six, touching their hearts In a way that nothing else can. They sit, Eating their plate of spaghetti (A subconscious attempt To reach the happiness seen In the movie of their childhood, Lady and the Tramp). Except unlike in the movies Their kiss is completely unfeeling, Devoid of love. They both dance In their masquerade Their masks of romance Hiding their true feelings (Or rather, their lack of such emotions). Caught in a waltz, Stepping to the beat Of Insincerity and Dishonesty, Twirling around the floor In shoes filled with Deceit and Corruption, Spinning with the pretense of love, The façade of tenderness and passion, Spiraling Out of all control.
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