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Poetry
snap
By andybyers
30 January 2008
you can't breathe a word of love
; the snap of a twig,
     and all that wild beauty, fled
but sprinkle the merest crumbs, and
your yard is home to wonder

she feels your eyes
she knows your heart
but never speak it:
     your words a cage

cage your words


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hmm
Written by sarahh (18 comments posted) 5th February 2008
I like it, the poem wouldn't make sense if the first and last line didn't connect at all. But you did a good job at it. I don't get the 'merest crumbs," but I am sure it makes sense I just don't get it can you explain?  
Thanks for your writing.

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