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Ella
By petetheverse
01 February 2008
Having just watched a BBC 4 filmed biography, I thought I would post my own, poor effort at summarising of one of the world's greatest recorded singers.  This was written some years ago; but Ella's voice touches parts of us that we probably never knew we had.

ELLA

 

Her voice I knew
From weeks of records
Played as a backdrop
To years of life.

Ella in Concert, 1960:
The audience,
Awash with awe,
Is rapt in thrall.

Each intonation,
Subliminally etched,
Strikes chords
That quiver in the spine.

The songs, the sound,
The voice,
Encapsulate the culture
Of a passing generation.

I believed
I knew emotion,
But her voice,
Her phrasing, timing,

And her pitch,
Which had no peer,
Tore at the hearts
In ten thousand seats.

The audience
Became came a congregation
As she wracked ten thousand souls
And wrenched unnumbered tears.

Exhilaration
Begat exhaustion
As we each receive
This gift of privilege:

To have shared her dream;
An evanescent yet enduring
Distillation: the essence
Of the incomparable – Ella.

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Written by Warchild (5 comments posted) 2nd February 2008
There is a picture been painted and it has the features of something some people know then it is good as art educates,inspires and entertaines
Error - 'received' - Stanza 8, Line 3
Written by petetheverse (164 comments posted) 2nd February 2008
Thank you. 
For the perfectionists, have somehow transposed this without a 'd' on "receive". 
PTV

Written by audrie (454 comments posted) 2nd February 2008
I'm certainly with you on Ella, Pete. Liquid gold I used to call her voice. Don't know anyone who can match her.

Written by Phil (6951 comments posted) 2nd February 2008
Admiration shines through in this. As a tribute then, a success. I thought the specific worked better than the general - but we all react differently to the same words.For others it may be the other way around. 
 
Phil

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