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A Song for Imbolc
By Veronica_Milvus
03 February 2008

I wrote this last week for the pagan festival of Imbolc (2nd February) which celebrates the goddess Brigid who brings the spring.  She has also got a thing for wishing wells, apparently.


A SONG FOR IMBOLC
 

Toss a coin into my well

See its coppery circle spin

Flash its fiery disc – a spell

To bid the springtime to begin.

Cold the wind and hard the ground

Crisp the frost upon the grass

But while my footsteps make no sound

A snowdrop blossoms as I pass.

Buds on branches, leaves tight furled

The catkins on the hazel tree

The stretching, yawning, waking world

I touch, and it responds to me.

Make your wish at Brigid’s Well

The copper glint buys spring begun

And through the thawing winter, tell

The promise of a summer’s sun.

Reviews

Written by Fledermaus (3475 comments posted) 4th February 2008
Very good poem. This had a very nice voice, not vague or too dreamy, but simple and beautiful. It seems to refute many of my prejudices which I had about neo-paganism. Liked it an enormous lot.
great first image...
Written by patterjack (1429 comments posted) 30th June 2008
which carries through the whole poem to a fine ending . 
 
has the invocational chant that is fittingly expressed in the inverted epithets  
 
patterjack

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