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Sunshine Poetry ( Translated in English )
By Azka123
03 February 2008
This is the poetry I had read in Urdu, my first language. I liked it and translated that in English in my own way. However some of the sentences I had changed little bit. I will welcome comments and complaints (whatever you don't like don't hesitate in asking me or telling me).

Sunshine blue sky, blue sky break the cloud,
Sunshine blue sky, blue sky, break the cloud,
RE SGA RE SGA GA GA GA RE SA RE SGA RE SGA GA GA GA RE SA.
The Moon, the Sun, the millions of Stars are all for you,
Then why do you argue.
Extended are lines in this Earth,
Don't see the lines extended in the Earth,
Between two hearts, are these walls,
Anywhere in the world,
Anyone from pain,
Loneliness we feel here.
The feelings of them, the presence of injuries,
Own heart cries with grief,
Cry eyes, cry eyes

Why are you waiting for another Day another Time?
Some day we have to find a new ways to see.
Why are you waiting for another Sign another Cause?
Sometime we have to find a new way to see.

Why the heart seems to have separation,
Why the distance become great,
Excellent is life, is beautiful the world,
Relationship with great difficulties are made here, you see,
Can be broken in just one moment.

Love is medicine, of each and every pain,
Is a strong thread, of each and every relation,
Only love can break every corner,
Love can also finish the world in a moment.

Anywhere in the world,
Anyone from pain,
Loneliness we feel here,
Feelings of them the presence of injuries
Own heart cries with grief.

The Moon, the Sun, the millions of Stars, are all for you,
Then why do you argue,
Extended are lines in this earth,
Don't see those extended lines in the earth,
Between two hearts are these walls.
The Moon, the Sun, the millions of Stars are all for you
Then why do you argue.


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