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The Leopard That Changed It's Spots
By Blade
04 February 2008
Just a little, hopefully humorous thing.

The Leopard That Changed It's Spots

There was once the Leopard that changed its spots.
He thought it was so dull to always wear dots
And thus he had them traded, for what - guess you might,
But time is of the essence, so I’ll tell you – stripes.
No more was he the Leopard with strange colouring,
But just a simple Tiger – how quaint and boring.
There’s not much worth in a poem that ends with no gist:
Most spots* are more compelling without fearsome beasts.

* Spot – noun:
1. a comparatively small, usually roundish, part of a surface differing from the rest in color, texture, character, etc.: a bald spot.
2. Usually, spots. places of entertainment or sightseeing interest: We went to a few spots to dance and see the floor shows.

Reviews

Written by Fledermaus (3477 comments posted) 4th February 2008
Very enjoyable. I liked this a lot. I know this isn't much of a review, but it's all I can say about it. Enjoyed it a lot.

Written by Blade (14 comments posted) 4th February 2008
Probably not much to review anyway, just a silly rhyme with some creative usage of spots :grin I'm gratified that you liked it.

Written by Phil (6951 comments posted) 4th February 2008
It is a while since you've been here isn't it? Welcome back. Good to see someone else having a go at Lazy Writers too. 
 
Odd, when I first read this I thought there was an R in the last word. Slightly disappointed to discover I misread it! 
 
Phil

Written by twriter (117 comments posted) 4th February 2008
Blade, 
 
Thanks for posting on Lazy Writers' - great to have someone else joining in! 
 
I think this is really nice. However, some of the half rhymes you only just get away with but I will forgive you! :D The rhythm is nice and gives it bounce. What a great poem for children! 
 
VBW, 
 
TW 
 
P.S. Welcome back! 
 

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