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| By ellydawn | ||
| 06 February 2008 | ||
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After a break of about ten years, I have just written my first three poems, and am beginning to feel that there is still more that I can write. I would welcome any comments, thoughts or advice on the work I publish here. Waves against a bloody shore water but no stones shedding skin: sanitised and naked a retreating tide of sorrow and joy stepping into the hollow of vanishing fears and dreams the rise and fall bears the thief stealthily, magically a stream, a river, a sea, an ocean i am swallowed by molecules stripped by equation deconstructed by imitation i float but am anchored stained around the edges i no longer define myself but consult the black and white for guidance in my absence a catalyst of emptiness an equal and opposite reaction accelerating decomposition my chemical swan song.
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