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Poetry
Cavity
By Matthiasrising
07 February 2008
Not like in tooth. Look up superior sagittal sinus.

Deepening hole

In the back of my head

Lifeblood falls

Dripping down

The back of my throat

Makes me sick

 

Wake up to chaos

Again everyday

Again cloudy day

Deepening hole

In the world

In my world

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Written by margarita (30 comments posted) 7th February 2008
hi there..i've really enjoyed reading your last three entries...Cavity being my favourite...the colour and depth of the first stanza is quite alarming and then a sense of spiraling confusion in the last...you choose your words very well!

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