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| Unsuspecting likness | |
| By sarahh | ||||||
| 07 February 2008 | ||||||
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Kinda make believe poem I don't really like this guy as much as the poem appears but like most things I write, well I don't my hands do and sometimes I just cant stop them. Thanks for reading. The light from your eyes shines my weary way. Brightens my path, and clears the polluted way. Without you I am lost, I am lead astray. For if you go, I might follow, and that I may. I love you and thats the truth, my heart is your clay, Waiting to be molded, into a perfect cliche. It's is yours to be toyed with, I'll do what you say. You are scared, I understand the stuggles that you display. Things will get better, they always do, thats just the way. You can see the happiness if you tried, but please just stay. I know you, and if you go away, you will never know, the smile that rarely shows, it could always glow. Just give it a chance, wait for tomorrow. The beauty of the Earth is just covered up by sorrow, Peel back the emptiness and look forward to tomorrow. The rough patch that you call your life will suddenly go, and you will see the sun and forever it will glow. The things that you have over come, will always know. It made you what you are today, ready for another show. Don't listen to your worn out spirit, take my hand and never let go.
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