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L'esprit de l'escalier
By patterjack
08 February 2008
Another bloody sonnet

L'esprit de l'escalier.


It would be best perhaps to cut them dead
or walk away with a scarcely hidden sneer
after the cruel things that have been said
belittling something that you hold most dear.

But in the moment the hurt has cut too deep
and the mind closed off, the tongue clove to the roof
of a mouth gone dry, and eyes that need to weep
withheld the bitter tears of their reproof.

No doubt the words will come to you at length;
bitingly harsh, full of impotent rage.        
Just hope that in the end you have the strength
to swallow them and simply disengage.
                 
Take a deep breath, then, though all the while
you betray your instincts with a bitter smile.

Reviews

Written by francoise (129 comments posted) 8th February 2008
..but its bloody good! 
It was so pleasurable to read. The wording, emotional content were just right to me.  
'clove' i like this word though Im going to confess that I dont know what it is! 
 

Written by Veronica_Milvus (704 comments posted) 8th February 2008
clove - past tense of cleave. The only verb I know that has two opposite meanings. (apart from "lend"!) 
 
It's good, I had to read it twice to really get what it was about. Sums up the feeling of being upset and unable to think of a smart retort in time. What prompted it?
thank you both
Written by patterjack (1328 comments posted) 8th February 2008
What prompted it ? Memories of the many times I have felt the problem , recalled in the hours when musing , not fully awake !!  
 
Another of my accreted efforts. 
 
patterjack

Written by Phil (6836 comments posted) 8th February 2008
Liked this very much, Brian. Direct with some power of feeling. 
 
A subject I've pondered a few times - though not poetically. It strikes me that the times we are lost for words are when our pride or deeply held emotions are challenged. Often the words are there but we (I) are unable to deliver them. 
 
Phil
how very applicable
Written by no1butClo (339 comments posted) 10th February 2008
to just about any point in life. Simple and easy to read. Didn't like "reproof" - no suggestions to replace it, it just seems a bit awkward. 
 
Pourquoi s'est appelle 'L'espirit de l'escalier' ? 
 
pardon my french ^_^ 
 
clo
For the benefit of those
Written by patterjack (1328 comments posted) 10th February 2008
who have not met the phrase the easiest explanation is found here : 
 
http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/L'esprit_de_l'escalier 
 
I have known of it for many years , but was ignorant of its meaning and in particular its derivation for almost as many -- and often needed to re-check to see that I had got it right whenever I used it . 
 
I have another peculiar French phrase that I am toying with at the moment. We will see if anything comes of it  
 
patterjack 

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