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Dragonfly
By ssandz
10 February 2008

Dragonfly, dragonfly      
Shimmer-bright              
Dipping, diving              
In dappled sunlight.       
Hovering silent over silver pond,  
Alighting on filigree-fragile frond.
Dancing, entrancing           
My jaded eye,                      
My sore soul lifts
As you zigzag by.

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Blake's echo.
Written by gerardconnolly (1186 comments posted) 11th February 2008
Shades of Tyger Tyger! here which tends to devalue the originality of the piece. Best try having confidence in your own ideas unless you are aiming for a simple parody. 
 
Slan!

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